As I am tending the crops on my field I hear screaming, and loud drums. I am trying to see what is  happening, but I can't because everyone is running away. Then I see it, the Mongols have come to raid our village. My mom tells me to run without them. I will not do this, I must try to save my family. I go to my shack and get the swords Dad has secretly put there. 
   I run out to give my mom, and dad the swords. We are not the only ones fighting for our village some of our neighbors are too. We know that we are no match for the Mongols, so we will try to fight them off as best as we can. I know we will run when we feel we are losing. We have stubborn leaders in this village that will keep fighting forever, but I do not believe that is a wise decision.
   We have just began to run. I am nearly out of breath, and we haven't caught up with the rest of the village. I fear we will never find them. While we are running we meet another tribe. They are nice people, my parents say we might just stay here and become part of the tribe. They have already offered us to stay. So it is settled we will stay. I am just worried that the Mongols will come here next. Well for now I am just happy to be safe.
Henry
12/21/2012 04:24:23 am

This is a really good blog, I don't see any spelling or grammar mistakes, but you are supposed to be a farmer.

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erica
2/25/2013 09:52:36 am

Oh I am because i said that I am tending the crops on my field

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